Here is my very
first draft of my rhetorical analysis! I do realize that it is a bit too extreme on the wordiness and the vocabulary; I'll be working on chopping that down for the other drafts. In the meantime, please feel free to comment or recommend or correct anything else on my paper; your help is greatly appreciated!
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Note: I checked out
Michael Gee's and
Arrick Benson's papers and made some suggestions there. Both papers were pretty good!
Note 2: I consulted one of my siblings for more help with my paper. He said that it was good overall, but there are those instances in which I drone off, using huge words and long sentences that could be better if I just used simpler vocabulary and shorter sentences. I will be working on keeping wordiness to a minimum in my draft.
Hello Davis. When I click on your hyperlink for "first draft" it sends me to a screen saying that I am being redirected to a Twitter page about the Enjoy logo. I am not sure if the issue is with my computer or maybe you hyperlinked the words to the incorrect website.
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